Thank you, Hannah! I have been waiting for an essay to appear on kidswrite4kids.com for a long time! "You're Not the Only One on This Planet!" is both informative and, because of the facts you present, persuasive. The topic is close to my own heart, too.
I especially like, and find effective, the use of questions to introduce and then to begin wrapping up the topic. The final sentence pointing to websites to check out is a very effective call to action.
Keep the essays coming! I hope your skill and wonderful energy inspire other kids to share their thoughts and research on important topics.
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